Judge Dax

Before I start this, I have been rather into more full developing every member in my Judge Council so I will do entire posts on one single character. I will start with the judge himself. I may continue this post later since it's towards the end of computer tech and I may not finish.

The picture above is kind of how I imagined him looking, only he has red eyes is the main difference. Dax is a split personality blade master, basically. Him and his twin, Magus, were a cross breed of 2 evolutions that originate from Kronos' world. Magus and Dax are known as the ultimate twins. Dax is suppose to be the greatest swordmen that ever has been or ever will be. While Magus is the most powerful man, mage, that will ever live. The Judge's highest law and job is to keep the natural balance of shadow and light from breaking. If either darkness or light overpowers the either to the near point of extinction existense would crash and everything would cease to be. Having his dark and light split personality it makes him the perfect judge. He can kill ruthlessly or smite evil as he wishes. As judge he's known for passing the law for the judge council of "One Council, One Appearance". This law enforced the whole judge council to wear similiar dark looking cloaks that were specially made to make them all look the same and sound the same. The goal of the law was to make the judge council seem as one being and if confronted by one council member you could never be sure if it was the judge himself or number 12. Dax is suppose to be the ultimate judge and is not suppose to die. We'll see about that though, I have no intention of kill him.

On an ending note this picture is kind of how I imagined him again. I ment for the top one to be like when he's in his dark mind set and the bottom one in his happy light mind set.

As a side note, he wields Masamune. Masamune is suppose to be the sharpest lightest and most all out deady blade. It has the ability to change into any kind of blade including split into two seperate blades. Masamune is the youngest of the 3 ultimate blades and said to be the one that enjoyed fighting the most. Magus weilds the blade with deadly ability.

Haha, hope that made sense. Please comment your thoughts whether they be, that made no sense, or Your crazy.

A short story about the Judge Council.

Well, wrote this during computer tech out of boredom. Hope you like it.

Another Friendly Meeting

“My Judge,” spoke Halowine who had ghost stepped into the Council Room. The room would probably appear quite magnificent. It was very large and had a dome ceiling. All the walls chairs and windows were all made out of a Crystalline Glass that looked much like glass but, was harder than even crystal. Crystalline Glass kind of has a stained glass window feel to it that makes it different shades of white. The room was just a big circle with 13 tall chairs in it, each chair a certain height. Two tall dark figures dressed it long black cloaks that concealed their identities were in the room. One was sitting on the highest chair in the room and the other kneeling at the ground.

“What is it you want my son?” rang down the judges voice to Halowine echoing through the empty round room.

“I think there’s a matter that needs to be brought to the Council’s attention,” Halowine spoke in his deep voice while standing.

“Oh, this surprises me because you don’t normally enjoy the others company,” The Judge said while chuckling.

“Maybe that informs you to his urgency” Halowine said without the merest crumb of humor.

“Very well my son.” At that The Judge put his hand down to the arm of his great chair where white lights formed into existence where his hand lay above. Lightly touching the lights in a rhythmic order the lights all shined at once suddenly and went out. Without warning 11 more people appeared in the room sitting in the various chairs. “Attendance.”

“Number 12,” said the slim figure in the shortest chair slipping off her hood, “Meek.” She had a small face with a strong jaw blue eyes and sandy blonde hair that she had pulled up on the back of her head.

“Number 11,” rang out what could be called a charming mischievous voice, “Grem.” Grem had pitch black hair that almost covered his eyes and kind of feathered out. With eyes blood red and skin the nice tan color of a life guard that works outside, he had a very sinister, yet charming, look. When taken off his hood the charm to hide his black wings that came from his back were revealed. He truly is the son of death.

“Number10,” came out a voice that seemed use to giving orders and had a command about it “Sam.” As he lifted his hood he had a very strong built face. With cheek bones and a jaw bone that protruded making his face both menacing and powerful. Dark brown eyes and his dark brown eye brows and hair just completed his mercenary like look.

“Number9,” drooled out a voice that sounded as bored as a teenager in a lecture in a math class, “Leon.” From under his hood came out bright orange hair and light green eyes that gave him a lively look. Despite his look he bore a extremely bored expression as if this was the last place he wanted to be.

“Number 8,” croaked out the low voice from the next chair, “Made-, “stopping mid-name she went into a coughing fit.

“Are you alright my daughter?” despite the situation there was true sincerity in The Judge’s voice.

“Yes just a little drunk that’s all, Number8 Madeline.” As she removed her hood an explosion of colors burst forth. Her hair was long enough when straightened that it went down to her waist. Not only was it long but it was randomly 62 different colors ranging from black to white and yellow to purple. At the moment it was not well kept and all over the place making it almost impossible to see the unique member behind it.

“You are the epitome of lowly humans Madeline.” Rang the smooth bell like voice of the figure in the next highest seat.

“Yeah well you should shut the—(I refrain from swearing in my writing but Madeline’s character calls for it so I’ll let you fill in the blank).” Gargled our Madeline.

“Number7 Vasarviouz,” this being Madeline’s prosecutor. His hair was a dark black that spiked at the back of his head but came down in bangs around his eyes. On top of that of that long gray hair sprouted from the top of his head. Being a vampire Vasarviouz hair grew and changed color according to his strength and not his age. He normally did not have any malice towards humans but viewed Madeline very in very low respect.

“Numbe-,” Boomed out number 5’s over excited tone.

“Idiot brother don’t you know that 6 is to be announced before, 5 of are you even that stupid.” Cold as ice number 6’s voice streamed out at 5.

“Oh, I just didn’t think you cared to be announced brother, it’s all yours.” It was obvious that number 6 did not think his brother, number5, very funny.

“Number6 Blight,” came out the same voice, emotionless now and not icy. His hair was a white color that had the lightest color of blue in it. His eyes a dark deep ocean blue color only made his dark expression all the darker.

“Number5 Blake,” yelled the figure that, despite being twins, actually appeared quite different from Blight. Despite their identical looks the way that they composed themselves made them totally different people. When Blight had a faint frown Blake had a bright smile.

“Number4,” purred out the slim tall figure in the next chair, “Haiku.” Her hair short, barely touching her shoulders, and feathering out in different directions gave her a wild look. Just like all those in her family she had very bright yellow colored hair. It wasn’t exactly blonde more of a solid yellow color. She had dark green eyes that strangely resembled cat’s eyes and when she smiled you got sharp teeth to look at.

“Number3 Jarx,” chuckled out Haiku’s older brother. Having the same unique color of hair as Haiku it was almost impossible to mistake them for anything but siblings. Jarx had a dark green eye that obviously looked like a cat’s eye but his other eye was very unique; consisting of constantly changing colors and symbols it is practically impossible to describe. While his eye resembled a cat much more then Haiku’s his constant smile was not so menacing.

“Oh Jarx, my dear brother was wondering if you ever figured out how to manipulate the production of energy?” The Judge questioned Jarx.

“I think I am close, but I’m afraid it may create a hole in time and suck me through it and I would rather not take that chance.” Jarx spoke in his voice that always seemed to be on the verge of uncontrollable laughter, “Then again, there is always lots of little Chaos children I could perhaps try it.”

“As your Judge I forbid it.”

“Darn…”

“Number2 Zift,” spoke the person that sat right above Jarx. He had a buzzed hair cut his hair was a dark black so it still showed up very nicely. His eyes were a bright yellow color that can be best compared to lightning. At the moment he was seemingly restless has his eyes swung back and forth and he leaned so far forward he appeared to almost be falling out of his chair.

“Number1 Halowine,” came out the same low voice that had asked for the meeting come to be. He had an orange fox colored hair and dark black eyes that would frighten the devil himself. From the back of his jacket a fox tail poked out waving back and forth in an impatient matter.

“I am Judge Dax, and I have called you all together to listen to Halowine who seems to have something he sees fit to share with us, Halowine,” Spoke Dax in an expectant voice of Halowine to take charge. Without hesitation Halowine leaped from his 29 foot high chair landing nimbly on his feet in the center of the room.

“Dax is preparing to proclaim war on Chaos and I just wanted all of you to know so that perhaps you will better prepare for war so we will not disgrace our name as the Judge Council, that is all.” Dax said very audibly but also darkly. In soundless movement Dax was suddenly standing next to Halowine, before Halowine had time to react Dax’s fist met directly with his stomach flinging him in air.

“YOU DARE TO QUESTION MY ORDER AND TELL THEM OF SOMETHING I DO NOT WANT TOLD YET!?!”Exploded out The Judge’s voice suddenly having a frightening power to it. Halowine slammed into the wall and slumped to the ground. In the same manner that Dax appeared in front of Halowine and slammed him in the gut Haiku, number4, appeared in front of him grabbed his shoulders and stared into the black hole his hood made over his face that he never removed.

“Calm down Dax, you’ve lost control, you know Halowine wants to help you just have lost control, breath.” Haiku spoke in a very calm and soothing voice. After 30 seconds of Haiku’s comforting The Judge stood straight and leaped back up to his 30 foot chair.

“I pray your forgiveness my loyal son Halowine, I have not let my dark side control for so long that when he started to take over I had no control.” Came down the Judge’s voice in obvious meekness, “It’s obvious I have some training of my own to do, you are all dismissed.” In the blink of an eye the room was empty for all but, The Judge again.

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Just Like This

Don't know how many of you read this and how many of you know who the judge council is that do read this blog. Here is a light background on what and who the judge council is: The Judge Council consists of 1 judge and 12 counselors, their sole purpose is to make both sides of light and darkness equal so that existence does not cease, they like to be thought of as one group so they go around dressed in dark cloaks that make them all look almost identical (sometimes the judge will go out in this cloak too), the system is set up so that when number 6 dies 7 takes his/her place and so on so forth and a new 12 is chosen, members are normally chosen for their superior ability in combat and ability to make just decisions, if a member of the judge council is killed from another warden (or person of balance) they take that judges number and place in less the judge sees fit for them not to be part of his/her council.

Alright I think that will do. Anyways the whole point of this is so that I could put up this picture I found of kind of how i imagined a judge council member looking like.

There it is, i always imagined shoulders wider with the hood lower on the top and a collar on the bottom so it made more sense why their face was hidden but oh well i thought it was pretty cool. Hope you enjoy jon's small note on his insanity ^_^!

Thoughts of Anthonies Past

I realized I never really made a good past for Anthony. Always there has been afuture for him, but I have never made a real past. For instance; name of parents, where he lives, whether he's part of religion, culture, siblings, traumatizing events in his life, etc.... According to teacher I only have 3 more minutes to type so I better jot down a few thoughts REAL quick. I've been thinking of maybe making him an orphan or something. Maybe even make it so he only has one parent just like Jenny so they can relate. Then again, that could be a little lame..... Oh well, I'm sure i'll get it all thought out eventually!!!

Character Development

How much should I involve my immortal characters in my book? I mean, will it just be too confusing to have these superior beings coming in? I was planning to make it so Jenny was seen as a way to getting through to Aidan, otherwise a weakness. So that implies big dark creepy people coming to kidnap/kill her. Requiring Aidan to be with her at all times for safety. Gah, sorry if all these posts seem so pointless. I just have to "practice typing" during the first 15 minutes of computer tech and typing games are such a drag. I'm just trying to pass the time. Maybe i'll just explode!!!!

A change of Heart

I'm "redesigning" Kronos. I decided that somebody that loves killing and violence doesn't make a good character or good self image! Kronos will mostly be the same. In this post I will be describing things about him that most anyone who reads this blog didn't even know before. For example, I am changing what Kronos' chosen weapon is and his over all look. Before Kronos' chosen weapon was a 10 foot long thin as paper sword named Magus. I am changing this weapons name to Masamune and it is the weapon that Judge Dax wields. Kronos' "weapon" is a pair of gloves (lol). This gloves when put on connect to his actual blood stream, yes it does puncture his skin when he put them on but not very much. By doing this the gloves are able to directly connect to the energy flowing through his body allowing him to solidfy around his hands making them into a weapon capable of blasting limbs off. For looks Kronos looks like less of a kid is a big thing. He'll be broader and his hair will be less spiky and anime like and more just like a messy guys hair. For personal likes changed his eyes to a light blue color (ti he). His new focus instead of killing is now helping others. Otherwise what he learned from his mortal life. "When you have somebody to fight for, that is when you become truely strong" ~Haku (yay my favoritists character!)

After Mom's COMMENT!

I wish to show a character outline of all the characters that I have spoken of before. Depending on how much time I have in computer tech I will probably go into characters that are not even in the book.

Main (main) characters:

Jennifer Grace: An 17 year old teenager, junior in highschool, that lives in South Jordan Utah. She is about 5 foot 5 inches. Long brown, i explain it being chocolate milk chocolate, colored hair. Light sky colored eyes. She is always happy and always wants to be helpful. She has a "crush" on the senior Anthony Johnson.

Anthony Johnson: 18 Years old with long feathery black hair. His eyes are a very dark deep ocean blue. Throughout the books Jenny always comments about his tan skin, I truthfully have not come up for a real reason why he is tan yet but I plan for it to be some kind of year round sport. He is very kind and will go to any length to do what he believes is right. That iron willed personality of him is actually his down fall.

Aiden (The Dark Figure): The first time Jenny see's him she describes him as being around 9 feet tall (maybe 10) and looking like a shadowy hooded figure. I truthfully stole the way he looks from how orginazation 13 looks from kingdom hearts with their hoods on. I tried to find a way to post a link to what they look like from deviant art but blogger wont let me. My bad. Oh well, he is dark and dreary but cares alot about Jenny and plays a very main role in the story.

Main (not so main) characters:

Meg (havent come up with last name): I would probably say Meg is Jenny's best friend. She is 4 foot 5 inches. Short firey red hair and a personality to match it. Otherwise she is a small sprity, hyper, intense, little girl. Side note, her mom works two jobs because her dad walked out on them so she has to improvise without a mother alot. That inclues taking care of her two younger siblings. ( I think I'll name them Tod and Jill).

Chad (not sure yet): He is a unorganized need to get his life in order guy. He misses alot of school because he is out drinking and he eyes girls in a bad way. Jenny is too innocent to notice how he eyes her all the time and it turns out bad. He is about 5 foot 7 inches with short, dirty mind you, brown hair. He has dark brown eyes and as a side detail is Meg's car pool to school.

Shelley and Bretney: The Asian twins. I needed more side character strange friends for Jenny while I was sitting in science. So I was sitting next to these two funny Asian girls that do oragami all the time named Shelly and Bretney. I was trying to get ideas for the book when they said I should base two characters after them and make them twins. In the end I did but I switched it around a bit. Both Shelley and Bretney in real life are both pretty happy and always looking to the bright side of things. In the book Shelley is an optimists and Bretney is a pestimists and they're always getting in fights because of it. They're both 5 foot with, identical twins, long dark black hair with dark brown eyes.



Other people: I still plan to make a few friends for Anthony and chad and a few teachers and random students at school but, haven't gotten to it yet.

To explain the swords:
(only swords I have mentioned)

Marumasa: Was one of the first people to exist founding dark magic. When he died the realm keeper banished him to being a specialezed weapon (plan to come up witha fanchy name for that eventually). As a blade he is a long sword with a dark black colored blade that has a hilt that is grafted with gold looking material that are curved into flames. At the end of a hilt there is a dark gem, best way to describe it, that is suppose to be very hypnotic when looking into it. His role in the book is his original weilder is Felix the Cursed but Anthony steals Felix's power and marumasa with it. Marumasa will do anything to gain a body and continue his dark arts.

Edge: I slightly mentioned Edge before. He is Anthony's natural (normal) chosen weapon that was made for him. Edge was an elite ninja is the best way to describe him.

I would go on but out of time and not even suppose to be typing right now. LOVE YOU!

Well what the CRAP!!

Man, once again I really do not want to play some stupid typing game! So I decided I'd brainstorm or something on my blog :D! I have been changing alot of my story lately. In my story, i mentioned this in the outline, there is some vampiric dude that Anthony stabs to obtain power and he steals his powers and his cursed weapon Muramasa. Lately I have been realizing that this part of the story doesn't agree with the rest of my story. Originally this figure named Felix weilded Muramasa. He was from Kronos' world and he was part hawk. Felix has great power, but kind of like Kronos, he was never able to get his magic to do anything. Even in his second life, unlike Kronos, he could not get his "magical skills" to come out. His biggest fault is wrath. For this reason, yes in truth the weapon chooses the user, Muarmasa chose Felix. Muramasa, originally would not have chosen to become a weapon. He is one of the oldest people/weapons. Muramasa founded dark magic (black magic, offensive magic, evil, demonic, etc.) while Masamune founded sword play and physical fightign techniques and Exaclibur developed white magic (healing, supportive, etc.). Muramasa knew of Felix's great power and also knew he could use it. WAIT! Back track! I was saying that Muramasa didn't want to be a weapon, he was banished to being a weapon because they feared what he would do as an immortal. Anyways with Felix he almost uses Felix to steal his body and recreate himself so he could be a being again. Greatfully the Realm Keeper was one step ahead of him and banished him back into his sword and sealed his ability to perform black magic without the weilders permission. After this ritual Felix was left as a shadow of a person. He looked much like a 3d walking shadow. So yeah just thought i'd share my inspiration ;)!

Chapter 4 2nd half

"Now Kronos I wish to see how much of a natural you are at this," Phobos said with almost a mocking tone.
"Alright what do I do? I mean obviously I have to talk to my conscious but, how do I exactly do that?"
"Simple, just kind of meditate or you could even say zone out. Then start talking as if someone else is there. If you have a friendly magic you might just get a reply back. Don't get your hopes up though. Magic's rarely actually talk you will see." With that said I, Kronos, sat down and tried to drain all my surroundings. Really though it was all pretty easy besides the hearing part. I hear so much and to completely try and mute that out took a lot of self control. It eventually came though. I felt a lot like I was floating. Alright here it goes, I thought.
"Hello???"
"Hi." said a voice that sounded a whole heck of a lot like mine. I almost lost my concentration after hearing that. I heard a voice clear and firm in my head. Maybe I'm going crazy because didnt Phobos say that they hardly talk back? "Well if you mean me by they, then precisely most of us avoid conversation. Yet you will find me alot like yourself. Entirely different then any other person." Said my magic in such a happy voice it could almost be considered giddy.
"You can hear my thoughts???" I questioned.
"Well techinically when your doing this right now your really thinking everything your saying. If that makes any sense?? Oh well does it matter. Sorry if your annoyed with me already but sense you've done this. Your mind is now open to me. I fear you are going to be hearing A LOT more from me. So better get use to hearing this voice."
"So I can wake up from this trance now?"
"YEP!"
I opened my eyes. Amazed to see that the world hadn't gone as bizzare as my mind had. Phobos saw the confused look on my face and got a smug smile.
"So, did you happen to hear your voice?" Everything about his tone thought he already knew the answer.
"Ya...." I said in a plain yet confused tone.
"WHAT!?! Do not lie to me Kronos!"
"I'm not lieing. In fact let me see if I can get a name from it."
Hey what's your name? I thought. "Oh, it's Magus Peayn. At your service master!" Oh so your calling me master now? "Nah, just something that popped into my head."
"Well do you have an answer for me Kronos???"
"Yes, sorry. Just so happens that Magus is very distracting. He keeps drawing away my mind on odd irrevalent subjects." Dang it my use off strange words was sure sign that I was deeply confused. Phobos probably thought I was crazy...
"That is unbelivable, your magic actually gave you it's NAME!?! Try and get it to do something impossible. Just to see if it'll do it!" Phobos had an excited tone like a little child at Christmas.
"Well do, sir." I replied it what I thought was a cool voice. Man I will I be glad when this training is over. "Oh really Kronos? and tell your little sensei or what ever that he can stop bugging you because I don't plan to do anything just because he wants." Oh comeon I already have him so amazed look at his face. This is more fun than I've had in forever. "Nope, no can do." There was something about the tone of Magus's voice that made me give up immediatly. "Well Phobos, Magus doesn't seem up to it today sorry about that," I said in a hesitant voice. I didn't know what he would think of this.
"Well than seems like maybe your lieing either way though I would say this concludes pretty much your first and only lesson on magic, dismissed."

Chapter 4 1st half

Chapter 4: (1st half)

You Never Know In tell you try


I never thought this hall could be so long. Felt like I went through a 10k run trying to get to that door that opened to the room where Phobos walked in circles about. When I finally reached the large metal door and pulled the handle while pushing on the door did I feel like I could handle it no longer. Let me say one thing real quick. Even though I am trying desperately to serve my family and become a worthy survivor of the Peayn family I have a few faults. Well more than a few, but, one of my largest ones is excitement mixed with impatience. You can't get me excited about something and expect me to wait. It is untold of. So when I walked in the room and Phobos said, "Wait a few minutes I need to gather my thoughts." I was about ready to scream bloody murder. Thankfully I choked down the scream and managed to just bite my lip in frustration. Suddenly I tasted blood and panicked for a few moments. Really it was just I always seem to forget how my teeth are somewhat unaturally sharp. All our teeth our, I guess it's one of our cat like features to have sharp teeth. You would think I would be able to remember by now, but, as always I'm always making a fool of myself. It seemd liked about 7 years, in truth about 7 minutes, before Phobos finally turned to me with the heir about him that he was going to speak.

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TIME OUT!!! Okay even though this may be all interesting I was just reading back on my 1st chapter. IGNORE THE FIRST CHAPTER. Let me hurry and make some corrections right now. His brothers name is Jarx and not Isaac. His teachers name is Phobos and not Bryan. He didn't go to school for when he was born the world was just torn to pieces and nothing really had enough order for school. Also the last thing Phobos says at the end of the first chapter. Totally ingore it all together. First of all Kronos should already know all about Jezabel. Second It's not phobos' attitude to be like that. Alright I hope that was everything if there is ANYTHING you do not understand just leave a comment and I will try and make all clear. Here I go again. Yeah, sorry side comment, Ignore everything I wrote before about Kronos not knowing who Jezabel is. I will tell you who she is in a short time.

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"So Kronos," Phobos said in a somewhat hesitant voice, "You are extremely excited to learn magic eh?"
"Yes Sir!" I said trying to restrain the tone of a kids excitement in my voice. Phobos than turned to me his scared up face and deep dark eyes seeming to look straight into me. His bright blonde almost yellow hair, like all of our hair, as boring as ever.
"Well that's good because you already know it." Wait what was he saying?
"Sir, are you mistaken I do not know how to use one ability that's out of the oridnary?" He better tell me something soon or I might get very angry. Well that is to say very dissapointed.
"You are not going to be the one casting the spells Kronos. We are never the ones that cast the spell. We only hold the power to instruct others to channel the energy around us as a weapon. Do you follow?" he said with his all so proffesional voice.
"I think so sir but, are you trying to say that all the stuff you have been doing like walking through walls and starting fire just by touching things is not your doing. That really you are just telling some other person to do it?" I truely was confused now.
"Yes, and no. Yes it was not me casting the spells no it was not another person casting the spells. It was, errr... How shall I word this. Let's say it was the other me. It was my other half. Many people know it as their conscious. The little thing that always seems to nudge you in the right direction. Almost like your very soul or inside being. Why would I say this is not me. Because In a very literal sense you have to ask your conscious to do the magic. You do not just do it, it takes a trade."
"A trade, what do they want money???" I said in an almost sarcastic tone but, curious non the less. Phobos than went to the other side of the room where a wooden table was propped up. It was not too large but, looked sturdy.
"I decided that an example would be the best way to describe this," he took a deep breath (he hates talking for long periods of times), "In everything we do, we require energy to do it. For example;" with a sudden motion he brought down his arm in the direct middle of the table and it smashed in two, if you don't count all the little spinters that flew everywhere. "When I did that, it required energy, conentration, and the actual action of doing it. Same basic thing goes with magic. Except you are giving the energy. You are concentrating, and finally acting one with your conscious. Understand?"
"Mostly, that all sounds nice but I can tell by the tone in your voice that you really don't expect me to get it." I said with my usual talking tone. Apparantly this tone was annoying and sometimes hard to understand at times. But, Jarx was the only one that said that. He complains about my existence alot.

OKAY!!! were ending their. Alex wants me to go on a bike ride. I'll hopefully post the 2nd half sometime soon. I love you all my family and sorry. I hope some of you still check it and comment. I love hearing comments from you!!!

Chapter 3 Anxiety

Time passes. My training never got any easier. I'd like to say that I always got better. Never was I fast enough learner for Phobos though. On an optimistic side though, It showed me purpose. I had a goal to keep up with Phobos to learn as fast as he could teach me. I learned quickly that magic was like another you. It's what many would call your spirit. Or you conscious. Some more loud and profound of what they want to say. Others were quiet or even telling you evil things to say. Phobos later admitted that I was not ready to be trained in communication with my magic yet. He was just trying to get me a little more into the training. I learned how to listen to him without any hesitation. As we moved on I started getting less bruised in our spars. I would actually see moves coming and block him. The only problem was striking back at him. Phobos had a firm belief that the best way to fight was to never block. Let all your blocks just be a counter attack back at the person. If your getting a fist thrust at you. Move in and around it into the enemy. Haiku and Jarx would come in every once and awhile. And observe and help me sometimes even. Haiku is a very loving sister and always glad to help. Jarx himself though is hard to get through to. He is always training and is hard to find a second to talk to him. All of us know all he wants is to find Jezabel and kill her. It's his one wish and desire. What he believes is his purpose in life. Right now I am not exactly sure what I want. Besides maybe be Phobos' triumphant student. In one of my conversations with Haiku about 6 months into my training, I was almost 17, she revealed a bit of news to me. There was mutterings about a strange man bent on killing all in his path.
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I turned 17 2 months ago. I've learned how to use my super sensitive hearing to my advantage with sparing with Phobos. Strangely I have learned how to hear Phobos' limbs tense right before they hit, strange habit of his. Warning me of which limb he is going to hit me with. He's also began training to fight with guns. From hand pistols to bazookas. One day that we believe to be the 23rd of March, we have no complete fact to know our guesses are right, Phobos had a special little thing proposed for me. He was going to ready me to speak to my magic. I find that Phobos likes to talk to himself a lot. It actually entertains me quite a bit. Yet that's probably makes him so brilliant. You know all geniuses talk to themselves right? I wake up on the 23rd and I hear some muttering. So I sit up and block out all my senses by ignoring everything around me. Believe me I'm so easily distracted this took many months of practice to get down. I opened my ears wide and began straining to listen. "I do not know if he is ready, but, he has been improving so fast and well." That made me extremely happy to know I was pleasing my master but I quickly dismissed my thoughts and concentrated on listening again. "Well than I'm going to do it. I'm going to teach him today!" What?!?! No I missed it. Me and my stupid absent mind. I just always had to zone out just at the right time to miss the important stuff. Now I had to wait though morning exercises, a full 3 hours, before finding out what in the world Phobos was muttering to himself about. I heard the pit pat of his feet echo down the hall way gradually getting louder. I realized through my listening I had forgetting to get ready for presenting myself to be trained. I hurry and got on my casual clothing for this kind of thing. I ran and got a t-shirt with some sweats just because, they were comfortable. I quickly ran to get everything on and make myself presentable in the 30 seconds I judged I had from the sound of Phobos' feet. Proud of the somewhat inhuman speed that I performed washing my face and throwing clothes on that took much practice and agility training to begin to master. I quickly ran to my small little desk that occupied the side of my room and sat down and tried to make myself look deep in thought. As if I was sitting their for the 5 minutes I was suppose to be. I had a bad feeling that It wasn't going to got through. Knowing Phobos he'd probably just see straight through it and might criticize me. I heard the click of the metal home made door open into my small little cellar you could call it. I heard Phobos breath in with some disappointment. What did I really look that bad. than I realized I forgot to tidy up my bed. Dang it! I knew I forgot something and oh my goodness I forgot to clean my sink which he asked me to do last night. I felt hopelessly doomed. Maybe I would have to wait for more than a few hours to find out what in the world he was going to teach me. He snapped his fingers I instantly was on my feet standing up straight with my eyes, and ears, having attention on him. If I have forgot to tell you before it's a bit difficult to talk to Phobos directly because, I have never really seen his face. He always finds a mask to put on, a cloth to wrap around his face, a veil, and any other thing you could think of. It has always made me wonder what was behind those concealment's. "Kronos, I would like you to run at least 3 miles within in 12 minutes and if you don't succeed the first time to do it again. Once you are done with that I would like you to work on your upper body which still seems to not be building as much as we would hope so." he said with a very what you could call professional tone. "Yes sir," I replied in an almost robotic tone back. Oh great, so that meant probably at the most 36 minutes of running and the rest of push ups, lifting, and other things of the sort. I was not looking forward but, oh well. I'd be in a better mood if I went in happier. So I tried to be optimistic and lighten up and think about how much it would help me in training. I got to our little area where we had all the exercise tools, including a track, and I began running. The 1st time through my 3 miles I did it within 18 minutes. That was okay though, I expected that my legs needed time to start getting blood pumping through them. The 2nd time I did a solid 12:30. I was so angry I was sure that should count. To be careful though that just in case Phobos some how found out and wouldn't teach me what ever he was going to teach me I did it over a 3rd time and did it in 11:45. Finally finished and panting with exhaustion I hurry and ran to our little food storage area and grabbed a basic health breakfast. Apple, milk, of course some cereal, just because it tasted good, a muffin (2 muffins actually) another apple an orange. I guess I was set I felt like I could eat more. I hurry and grabbed some waffles and went to our little kitchen and hurry and put everything together and chomped it down probably a little too fast. I quickly went back to the room and began working on doing around 100 push ups and pull ups. Some time passed and after much work I finally finished all I needed to do. I was exhausted and tired but, I knew the day had just begun. I went into the shower room where 3 dull you could say home made showers were there. I was not exactly sure how they were made but they worked. And I was grateful. For my training with Phobos in person I always changed into the long black hooded cloak. underneath I could wear what ever I wanted which usually consisted of another T shirt and what you could call basketball shorts. He wanted me to wear the cloak because it would be what I would be wearing when I went out with the family on hunts. I always took cold showers in the morning because, I found being cold once in a whole day was actually quite refreshing amongst all the heat. It was one of my faster showers. I quickly dressed and headed out of the shower rooms down a hall and to our training room. My heart beat quickened and Phobos heard me coming and I heard his heart beat quicken also.

HEY HEY!

Wow christmas was amazing and since your all down here you probably won't be checking this but! For James and others that have commented their a little lost at the top right part of my posts their is a link list for my chapters and their parts. Ummmm, it won't exactly let me put it in order but they are all labeled. So I hope that is good enough I might write the 2nd part of the 2nd chapter tomorrow!

Alright explanations

I've been feeling like I have not properly told you about my Kronos being half cat stuff and all that other stuff. So, how I told you guys about the happening. Well I thought at first that would be a trigger to some humans to evolve making them super natural. Well I didn't really specify in what ways they were supernatural before or how they could be unique that way. Before I wish I could of added more detail in about Kronos' super natural hearing. Like when he wakes up for the first day of magic in his room. Maybe I could say how he could hear Phobos' faint foot steps as he paced back and forth getting impatient. Any how I am also going to use this moment to explain a few new characters. Because, I've known about them forever but I finally feel like I can't wait any more chapters longer. First of all, there's his older brother and sister. His brother is the oldest and his name is Jarx. I've been changing his name alot but Jarx fits and i like it. He is a very serious factual kind of person. He likes getting things done in the best and easiest way. Normally very serious and not too many words to say. Yet whenever he's around Kronos' he seems to have a way of making fun of Kronos or playing pranks on Kronos. Although at heart he is very good. Than his Sisters name is.... This isn't for sure because I decided it might be kind of strange but I might go with it. But his sisters name is Haiku. Like the poem. She is very kind and likes to do things in the way that she can help the most people and get the job done. But in a way she is very much so like a warden. Or a gatekeeper I guess you could say. She is very fast, flexible, intelligent, and VERY physically strong. Although she is very loving and loves helping others. She has a rage for those that hurt others. She is known for her sharp cat like claws. But with her kind mood of things for missions and delays her and Jarx tend to get in lots of fights over decisions. The other unique things about these characters is unlike Kronos they still had memories of their parents. Kronos was too young at the time when his parents died. Giving all of them this want for revenge, on none the less that Jezibel. In fact it wasn't really her hand that killed their parents. It was just one of her mere acolytes and they had already eradicated him. Now their new target is Jezibel. Yet their parents death is not the only reason why they want to dispose of her. She is very cunning and evil and likes to see other people in pain just because she enjoys it. She is always greedy for power and death. That brings me to one of her most loyal acolytes. His name is Halowine. Oh and by the way Jezibel is half some creature they have no idea about it's rumored that she was once half crow but than she altered herself. But Halowine is half fox. Having fox ears and a fox tail. He himself is very strong and extremely fast. He also has a mind to not be easily tricked. He's a master of weapons but his favorite weapon is any sword in general. Also there is one last member of the Peayn family that is still alive. They consider him as their leader. His name........ Not exactly sure yet. I think it might be Jericho. Any way, he is known for his extreme mental capabilities. He can see many moves into the future making him a very flawless oppenant(holy cow I can not spell today). He also is very good at using a thing they call far sight. Which is, you guessed it, the ability to see things far away with his mind. Although he is a pain he has no aparrent cat like attributes except his long spiky cat like hair on top of his head. Alright I would actually explain more but I got to study for a test in geography tomorrow (pukes) Hope this made sense and was a little fun to read :D! Luv ya peepz

UPDATE!

Alright, this picture if gonna help me explain a few things. First up yes it is a copy of one of the picture down there. Second off it is Kronos. But don't think that's exactly what Kronos looks like. Well, yes it is what he looks like. But right now he wears more casual clothing and has a bit shorter hair. And doesn't have the mark on his neck. Any how! I'm going to use this picture to explain some differences I have made in my book that I find makes it make a bit more sense and adds a bit more unique ideas into the book with the Peayn family, Kronos' family. Alright so if you notice in the picture he has cat ears. I know they may not look like cat ears but what ever they are CAT EARS! Alright, so this explains why the family is a bit supernatural besides the magic part. And it also adds a bit more to give contrast to the other characters. Kronos now has super sensitive hearing. Phobos happens to have the keen instincts of the cat that make him agile and a quick thinker. Although all of them have a bit of that he's just to a bit greater extent. And heck I'll explain the rest of the families errr, at least the ones I have made. There is first Kronos' elder brother his name is...... (has to go look it up and been changing it a lot lately)....Isaac there you go Isaac. He has cat eyes. He can evaluate a given scenario within a fraction of a second allowing him to keep track of multiple things very quickly. Than their is Kronos' older sister Haiku. She has cats claws and their ability to jump and get around and climb things that you would seem impossible. Than there is/was more people in the Peayn family but,....... I don't feel like explaining that because it will ruin the upcoming chapter.

Chapter 2 (2nd part/half)

As usual, the room was dull with the dim light from the small light on the ceiling which gave the whole room a kind of dreary look. All the walls were made of nothing but smooth gray concrete. "So, are you ready to start?" he asked with a earnest tone yet I thought I might of heard a bit of sarcasm in the back of his throat.I slowly started walking towards him. He also slowly started walking towards me his short spiky black hair seeming to match the scenery of the room. His stern brown almost black eyes staring at me almost seeming to stare a hole straight through me.
"What do you think I've been waiting for so anxiously?" I said with a kind of frustrated tone, "Why do you think I've endured all the times you beat me tell I can't feel the beat anymore?" my ears started to twitch as they always did while I was in an impatient mood. After that he gave me a look like he was getting impatient. "Why is he impatient?" I thought to myself.
"Well than, maybe.... you are not ready?" he said with a voice that sounded like he was talking to a very young child at a school.
"Hmph, from what I understand isn't magic just a exercise used through the mind?" I said almost in anger but also, in curiosity.
"Yes, It's stress on your mental intellect but, It's worthless if you are not physically fit enough to do anything with it, and 2 to be able to think and react to what is happening," he said in and factual tone. "Boring" I thought.
"Well fine than," I said losing patience, "Can we please just start the lesson???" He inched towards me and said "O.K." He than walked to the far wall just a few inches from it's smooth surface.Than faced me and said "Alright first of all I find one of the best ways to learn is by example and a keen student. So, I want you to watch everything I do as I use magic. First of all I want you to figure out how I release it, and second how I control it. Think you can handel that?"
"Alright I'm watching, Phobos," I said about to burst with anxiety. He than started chanting to himself what sounded like random blabber. With my supernatural hearing I heard a few strange words here and there. He than closed his eyes and stood in a neutral position. After a few seconds he shouted "Taw Hite Dar NeKs!!!" in what sounded like a very angry and frustrated tone. Suddenly his whole form seemed to start to melt and his 6.3 foot tall image slumped into a liquid lump on the ground. In all truth. I was not that impressed. What good would that do him. Becoming a glop on the ground. How ingenious, not really..... Than suddenly this puddle on the ground moved swiftly towards him and clung to my foot. Than with quick agility wrapped up and around my body tell it took the form of Phobos. And turned solid with Phobos' hand in a lethal position around my Adam's Apple. "Now tell me what you saw?"
"Well the first thing I noticed is you concentrated by, I don't know, maybe first talking to yourself in some paradox of a language. Than you closed your eyes as if trying to ignore everything around you. Than you suddenly screamed something in probably some different language I don't know. I think you were swearing....." I paused for a second to see his reaction to that but he just kept waiting patiently. "So, than you kind of slumped into a blob on the ground and came hurling at me. And than caught me in a surprised state and took advantage to it." I said in a finishing and somewhat brave, I thought brave, tone.
"Ugh, Kronos, you always seem to observe the most unimportant parts of this," he said in an exasperated tone. "Allow me to explain it to you and than will start to get to work on you. Well than as you sort of mentioned the first thing I did was speak. Now you thought I was talking to myself? I was talking to magic, or you could say my magic. You see us humans have never been magically gifted. But we have others that are part of us in a sort that are. I was mumbling to him Er Tre Tirght. Which in a sense means Are you awake?. He didn't respond to me so I had to concentrate and find him. When I did I found that he was not very pleased with me. Because I have not spoken with him in awhile. And he was not very willing to perform his art for me. Although with my sudden out burst he decided he better. Than after the transforming from a solid to a liquid you basically got the idea."After the year long lecture of all of his wonders I was both curious and full of questions. Magic was a he?

Well than I'm not sure if I'm gonna end chapter 2 this way. But this is how I'm gonna end for now. Good night all.

Chapter 2 (1st part)

Chapter 2

"Magic"

*3 months later*

I woke up to the sound of an alarm clock on the ground next to me. It was dark in the room besides for it's red light stretching shadows across the room. It read 6:00 A.M. After 3 months I still had not totally gotten use to the early schedule.  Although this time when Phobos would spare me I would last for more than 5 seconds. I had reached 50 seconds. I don't know about you but when sparring someone like Phobos it was more like trying to fight back and machine gun that had bullets that were atomic bombs. But he had one very strong advantage that will hopefully start to change today. He knew how to use his magic. He has not told me much about magic. I just know you have to speak some sort of words in a special language. And things will happen, so just like those fictional books that you read right??? Well we will find out but, I have a feeling that it won't be as simple as that. Now let me explain my crazy schedule in the morning. From 6 to 8 I must do physical building things. Such as: push ups, sit ups, crunches, lunges, jumping jacks, mountain climbers, wall sits, pull ups, weight lifting, running, and things of the sort. Because believe it or not me and Phobos were the only people at head quarters. Because everyone else were on special missions. Including are leader, that is normally in head quarters shut up in his room. They suppose to be on separate missions all working to stop Jezibel. I actually still do not know that much about Jezibel except these few things I will share with you. One Jezibel goes by Jessica because Jezibel is the name of a very bad person in the Holy bible. By the way I do not know who Jezibel is in the Bible you would have to go look that up yourself. She is very much so a demon/human. Strangely enough though she only has 2 attributes about a demon that gives her away as a demon instead of a human. 1, she was very very very beautiful. She was lustful, she was a trap to humans. 2 she had wings of a demon. Although they were apparantly very easy to hide with magic. So as you can see, I have feeling very left behind not knowing a thing about magic. Any how, back to Jezibel. Since she was 3/4's demon she was very powerful. She's like the crazy ones you see in movies and you don't like the movie because it was so out there it was not believable. Yes she does have the capability to dodge bullets, run as fast as a car, yadda yadda. It goes on for what seems like forever. 

Well, that's just about everything I know about Jezibel. I think there's a few things I need to clarify about are present time and you could say location. First of all I'm not sure what year we were but I can tell you this. The happening happened in 2014. Now I need to explain the happening to you. It has many names actually, I've hear of it being called as the Salvation, Redemption, and many other religious comments. Yet simply this is what happened. And humongous Earthquake that went off our charts happened in a diagonal line all the way around the world. It cut humans population in half and covered some giant pieces of land with water and lifted other pieces of land. It has not been recorded how long it has been since the Happening. I can tell you that we do not have a map of the world now, but, I do know there is people that are trying to make maps. And there are people that are trying to recreate countries and governments. Although probably the biggest one is only of 15 million people that is way bigger than any other one. And that is still not that big. Another thing that happened. About 10% of the remaining population after the happening began to say involve. Began to become a bit stronger, bit smarter, and a bit faster than any other normal person. And most of all they began to be able to use these skills that were unexplainable by scientists. It is commonly known as Magic. Well now the Peayna family, my family, believes that there's a reason for this evolution. Something woke this evolution up in us. And it is that doom that Jezibel is trying to bring. Now that the human population had been evolving to prepare itself to stop this doom upon themselves. You also know how you guys don't know a things about the deep deep deep deep deep sea? We'll that giant earthquake kind of stirred up the waters. And their has been some reports from people in the family of strange human like fish that have been spotted at the surface of the water. Alright sorry if I'm boring you with this history lesson. So ya that is what the Peayna family is trying to do guard us from our doom. Haha, it really just kind of makes me laugh. Sounds so much like one of those story's you read in the books and so the actual fact that I'm in one is crazy. And I'm almost done with physical training I am ready for magic. Only 10 more minutes and I can finally go down the hall to our sparring room and start learning.

Well please tell me of any errors I made. I feel like I am writing forever. I have the rest of the chapter planned out I just can't write any more. So long, and I'm just barely starting to get to the main subject of the chapter >.