"Now Kronos I wish to see how much of a natural you are at this," Phobos said with almost a mocking tone.
"Alright what do I do? I mean obviously I have to talk to my conscious but, how do I exactly do that?"
"Simple, just kind of meditate or you could even say zone out. Then start talking as if someone else is there. If you have a friendly magic you might just get a reply back. Don't get your hopes up though. Magic's rarely actually talk you will see." With that said I, Kronos, sat down and tried to drain all my surroundings. Really though it was all pretty easy besides the hearing part. I hear so much and to completely try and mute that out took a lot of self control. It eventually came though. I felt a lot like I was floating. Alright here it goes, I thought.
"Hello???"
"Hi." said a voice that sounded a whole heck of a lot like mine. I almost lost my concentration after hearing that. I heard a voice clear and firm in my head. Maybe I'm going crazy because didnt Phobos say that they hardly talk back? "Well if you mean me by they, then precisely most of us avoid conversation. Yet you will find me alot like yourself. Entirely different then any other person." Said my magic in such a happy voice it could almost be considered giddy.
"You can hear my thoughts???" I questioned.
"Well techinically when your doing this right now your really thinking everything your saying. If that makes any sense?? Oh well does it matter. Sorry if your annoyed with me already but sense you've done this. Your mind is now open to me. I fear you are going to be hearing A LOT more from me. So better get use to hearing this voice."
"So I can wake up from this trance now?"
"YEP!"
I opened my eyes. Amazed to see that the world hadn't gone as bizzare as my mind had. Phobos saw the confused look on my face and got a smug smile.
"So, did you happen to hear your voice?" Everything about his tone thought he already knew the answer.
"Ya...." I said in a plain yet confused tone.
"WHAT!?! Do not lie to me Kronos!"
"I'm not lieing. In fact let me see if I can get a name from it."
Hey what's your name? I thought. "Oh, it's Magus Peayn. At your service master!" Oh so your calling me master now? "Nah, just something that popped into my head."
"Well do you have an answer for me Kronos???"
"Yes, sorry. Just so happens that Magus is very distracting. He keeps drawing away my mind on odd irrevalent subjects." Dang it my use off strange words was sure sign that I was deeply confused. Phobos probably thought I was crazy...
"That is unbelivable, your magic actually gave you it's NAME!?! Try and get it to do something impossible. Just to see if it'll do it!" Phobos had an excited tone like a little child at Christmas.
"Well do, sir." I replied it what I thought was a cool voice. Man I will I be glad when this training is over. "Oh really Kronos? and tell your little sensei or what ever that he can stop bugging you because I don't plan to do anything just because he wants." Oh comeon I already have him so amazed look at his face. This is more fun than I've had in forever. "Nope, no can do." There was something about the tone of Magus's voice that made me give up immediatly. "Well Phobos, Magus doesn't seem up to it today sorry about that," I said in a hesitant voice. I didn't know what he would think of this.
"Well than seems like maybe your lieing either way though I would say this concludes pretty much your first and only lesson on magic, dismissed."
Sunday, June 21, 2009
Friday, June 12, 2009
Chapter 4 1st half
Chapter 4: (1st half)
You Never Know In tell you try
I never thought this hall could be so long. Felt like I went through a 10k run trying to get to that door that opened to the room where Phobos walked in circles about. When I finally reached the large metal door and pulled the handle while pushing on the door did I feel like I could handle it no longer. Let me say one thing real quick. Even though I am trying desperately to serve my family and become a worthy survivor of the Peayn family I have a few faults. Well more than a few, but, one of my largest ones is excitement mixed with impatience. You can't get me excited about something and expect me to wait. It is untold of. So when I walked in the room and Phobos said, "Wait a few minutes I need to gather my thoughts." I was about ready to scream bloody murder. Thankfully I choked down the scream and managed to just bite my lip in frustration. Suddenly I tasted blood and panicked for a few moments. Really it was just I always seem to forget how my teeth are somewhat unaturally sharp. All our teeth our, I guess it's one of our cat like features to have sharp teeth. You would think I would be able to remember by now, but, as always I'm always making a fool of myself. It seemd liked about 7 years, in truth about 7 minutes, before Phobos finally turned to me with the heir about him that he was going to speak.
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You Never Know In tell you try
I never thought this hall could be so long. Felt like I went through a 10k run trying to get to that door that opened to the room where Phobos walked in circles about. When I finally reached the large metal door and pulled the handle while pushing on the door did I feel like I could handle it no longer. Let me say one thing real quick. Even though I am trying desperately to serve my family and become a worthy survivor of the Peayn family I have a few faults. Well more than a few, but, one of my largest ones is excitement mixed with impatience. You can't get me excited about something and expect me to wait. It is untold of. So when I walked in the room and Phobos said, "Wait a few minutes I need to gather my thoughts." I was about ready to scream bloody murder. Thankfully I choked down the scream and managed to just bite my lip in frustration. Suddenly I tasted blood and panicked for a few moments. Really it was just I always seem to forget how my teeth are somewhat unaturally sharp. All our teeth our, I guess it's one of our cat like features to have sharp teeth. You would think I would be able to remember by now, but, as always I'm always making a fool of myself. It seemd liked about 7 years, in truth about 7 minutes, before Phobos finally turned to me with the heir about him that he was going to speak.
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TIME OUT!!! Okay even though this may be all interesting I was just reading back on my 1st chapter. IGNORE THE FIRST CHAPTER. Let me hurry and make some corrections right now. His brothers name is Jarx and not Isaac. His teachers name is Phobos and not Bryan. He didn't go to school for when he was born the world was just torn to pieces and nothing really had enough order for school. Also the last thing Phobos says at the end of the first chapter. Totally ingore it all together. First of all Kronos should already know all about Jezabel. Second It's not phobos' attitude to be like that. Alright I hope that was everything if there is ANYTHING you do not understand just leave a comment and I will try and make all clear. Here I go again. Yeah, sorry side comment, Ignore everything I wrote before about Kronos not knowing who Jezabel is. I will tell you who she is in a short time.
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"So Kronos," Phobos said in a somewhat hesitant voice, "You are extremely excited to learn magic eh?"
"Yes Sir!" I said trying to restrain the tone of a kids excitement in my voice. Phobos than turned to me his scared up face and deep dark eyes seeming to look straight into me. His bright blonde almost yellow hair, like all of our hair, as boring as ever.
"Well that's good because you already know it." Wait what was he saying?
"Sir, are you mistaken I do not know how to use one ability that's out of the oridnary?" He better tell me something soon or I might get very angry. Well that is to say very dissapointed.
"You are not going to be the one casting the spells Kronos. We are never the ones that cast the spell. We only hold the power to instruct others to channel the energy around us as a weapon. Do you follow?" he said with his all so proffesional voice.
"I think so sir but, are you trying to say that all the stuff you have been doing like walking through walls and starting fire just by touching things is not your doing. That really you are just telling some other person to do it?" I truely was confused now.
"Yes, and no. Yes it was not me casting the spells no it was not another person casting the spells. It was, errr... How shall I word this. Let's say it was the other me. It was my other half. Many people know it as their conscious. The little thing that always seems to nudge you in the right direction. Almost like your very soul or inside being. Why would I say this is not me. Because In a very literal sense you have to ask your conscious to do the magic. You do not just do it, it takes a trade."
"A trade, what do they want money???" I said in an almost sarcastic tone but, curious non the less. Phobos than went to the other side of the room where a wooden table was propped up. It was not too large but, looked sturdy.
"I decided that an example would be the best way to describe this," he took a deep breath (he hates talking for long periods of times), "In everything we do, we require energy to do it. For example;" with a sudden motion he brought down his arm in the direct middle of the table and it smashed in two, if you don't count all the little spinters that flew everywhere. "When I did that, it required energy, conentration, and the actual action of doing it. Same basic thing goes with magic. Except you are giving the energy. You are concentrating, and finally acting one with your conscious. Understand?"
"Mostly, that all sounds nice but I can tell by the tone in your voice that you really don't expect me to get it." I said with my usual talking tone. Apparantly this tone was annoying and sometimes hard to understand at times. But, Jarx was the only one that said that. He complains about my existence alot.
OKAY!!! were ending their. Alex wants me to go on a bike ride. I'll hopefully post the 2nd half sometime soon. I love you all my family and sorry. I hope some of you still check it and comment. I love hearing comments from you!!!
"Yes Sir!" I said trying to restrain the tone of a kids excitement in my voice. Phobos than turned to me his scared up face and deep dark eyes seeming to look straight into me. His bright blonde almost yellow hair, like all of our hair, as boring as ever.
"Well that's good because you already know it." Wait what was he saying?
"Sir, are you mistaken I do not know how to use one ability that's out of the oridnary?" He better tell me something soon or I might get very angry. Well that is to say very dissapointed.
"You are not going to be the one casting the spells Kronos. We are never the ones that cast the spell. We only hold the power to instruct others to channel the energy around us as a weapon. Do you follow?" he said with his all so proffesional voice.
"I think so sir but, are you trying to say that all the stuff you have been doing like walking through walls and starting fire just by touching things is not your doing. That really you are just telling some other person to do it?" I truely was confused now.
"Yes, and no. Yes it was not me casting the spells no it was not another person casting the spells. It was, errr... How shall I word this. Let's say it was the other me. It was my other half. Many people know it as their conscious. The little thing that always seems to nudge you in the right direction. Almost like your very soul or inside being. Why would I say this is not me. Because In a very literal sense you have to ask your conscious to do the magic. You do not just do it, it takes a trade."
"A trade, what do they want money???" I said in an almost sarcastic tone but, curious non the less. Phobos than went to the other side of the room where a wooden table was propped up. It was not too large but, looked sturdy.
"I decided that an example would be the best way to describe this," he took a deep breath (he hates talking for long periods of times), "In everything we do, we require energy to do it. For example;" with a sudden motion he brought down his arm in the direct middle of the table and it smashed in two, if you don't count all the little spinters that flew everywhere. "When I did that, it required energy, conentration, and the actual action of doing it. Same basic thing goes with magic. Except you are giving the energy. You are concentrating, and finally acting one with your conscious. Understand?"
"Mostly, that all sounds nice but I can tell by the tone in your voice that you really don't expect me to get it." I said with my usual talking tone. Apparantly this tone was annoying and sometimes hard to understand at times. But, Jarx was the only one that said that. He complains about my existence alot.
OKAY!!! were ending their. Alex wants me to go on a bike ride. I'll hopefully post the 2nd half sometime soon. I love you all my family and sorry. I hope some of you still check it and comment. I love hearing comments from you!!!
Tuesday, June 2, 2009
Just a mere Thought
Wind rushes against your cheeks and through your hair
you stand their taking in all your surroundings
the sky is darkened up without any sky visible
you sit their breathing in the air
the whole Earth seems in anticipation
and in Unison with your breath
takes a breath before the
thunder storm
Sorry was just outside and a storm is probably coming. And I love it outside right before a storm. So, I decided to write that. I would also like to say I plan to write a lot in my book during the summer. Does not exactly mean I will but I'll try. By the way Fam thanks for the awesome vacation I love you all.
you stand their taking in all your surroundings
the sky is darkened up without any sky visible
you sit their breathing in the air
the whole Earth seems in anticipation
and in Unison with your breath
takes a breath before the
thunder storm
Sorry was just outside and a storm is probably coming. And I love it outside right before a storm. So, I decided to write that. I would also like to say I plan to write a lot in my book during the summer. Does not exactly mean I will but I'll try. By the way Fam thanks for the awesome vacation I love you all.
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