Passion of Darkness: (outline SPOILERS)

Lately I have been having new ideas that are based on a different story then Payne trilogy. Unlike the Payne books Passion of Darkness is only one book. Passion of Darkness is about a girl named Jennifer. Her father died when she was only 7. For 3 years she was in depression and would just cry all the time and never was happy. Her mother recalls one day that she came home and she could literally see a change. She was smiling as if she could never be happier. Ever since then Jennifer has been what ever help her mother needs. Everybody at school loves Jenny because her pure attitude and her love for everybody. She is currently 17 and a Junior in highschool. The book starts with her going to school like any day. I plan to have the first few chapters of the book building a basic structure of her life and who she is. Also developing a little teenager "love" relationship with her and a Senior (18 years old) named Anthony Johnson. He's suppose to be dreamy to a girl in everyway. Which is kind of difficult for me because i'm not a girl and don't know whats dreamy. I, right now, plan for him to have long black hair with hazel almost white eyes. His skin is suppose to be at a perfect tan color and he is suppose to be 6.2. He is well built probably around 150 lbs with all his weight being muscle weight. Although he's in no sport he's very athletic over all and is well natured. In the book Jenny's last day before the book is going to go crazy she is going to share "true loves kiss" with Tony (Anthony). She's all floaty when the next day at school she see's a dark figure in the cafeteria. With no warning she starts crying and she doesn't know why. Out of stress she will end up running out of the school and running off in endless directions. By the time she gets a hold of herself (she is in cross country running so she can go for awhile) she is in the front of a Harmon's. When she goes behind it she finds a guy named Ryan that has a history of sluffing school to get drunk. When Jenny see's him or good nature makes her way to vunerable and she ends up getting assaulted by him. Before she has time to react, Ryan is flying through the air with his right arm twisted in an odd direction. To translate that the new figure, the dark one, came and grapped Ryan's arm and threw him. In doing so, not totally on purpose, he broke Ryan's arm. The dark figure frightens Ryan so bad, with his mysterious powers, that Ryan eventually collapses. Moving on over the weekend Jennifer gets acquainted with the dark figure and desides to call him Aidan. When Aidan asks her why she said she needs to call him something and thinks the name matches him well. He pops up constantly throughout the rest of her school year. At the end of her school year, without warning, he picks her up and runs ( more like jumps ) off with her. By the way to explain more on Aidan. He is about 9 foot 7, he appears as a figure in a long black cloak shadowing his face. Sometime during the school year Jenny will reveal what his body looks like. Aidan's actually being consists of 4,756 ( I think that's the number i decided) different long strands of cloth that is harder then any material we have creatd on Earth. When she sees him for the first time she takse off his hood. All she sees is about 6 of the threads that were holding the hood in a head shape. Jenny doesn't know it at the time but Aidan is trying to move Jenny to protect her because other immortal's, people that have died and are in their second life, see Jenny as a way as finding weakness in his affection of Jenny. Although moving her won't slow down the immortal's too much he believes it will give him enough time to get help. While gone to get help Anthony get's visited by the Gate Keeper and Dread lord (kind of like a vampire) Drekzzero (best way to spell his name human tounge can't pronounce it corretly). He more or less tells him most of the truth. He skews it making Aidan look like the bad guy though and gives Tony the chance to obtain power so that he could "retrieve" Jenny. The price for the power was that after "saving" Jenny he would have to serve him (or sell his soul to Drekzzero) for the rest of existence, both after life and first life. His plan is he was going to use the legendary blade named Marumasa. The blade Masamune is said to be his twin brother. Marumasa was said to be cursed to never have power in less he found a mortal weilder foolish enough to try and steal it from an immortal. Accordingly the blade was suppose to inherit all the powers it stole from the immortal to the mortal as it's weilder and sharpen it's point again. Muramasa is approximately 4 foot long broad sword, the blade is black with a red hilt that was carbed after a ruby like material called Blood's Lust. After working for Drekzzero for awhile, although it's not true, Tony sees the Dread Lord himself being the most powerful he's ever seen. Although Tony could never stab him if he was aware, when Drekzzero was in a trance to search for one he found approriate for Marumasa he is completely vunerable and has no idea what is going on around him. Tony notices this and Drekzzero never ever thought as the mortal as a threat. When in one of these trances Tony stabs Drekzzero formally known as Drekzzero The God of Deceipt and Gate Keeper to Darkness. In doing this he gained is abilities that are very similiar to what people would Imagine the Grim Reaper would have. Marumasa grants him the ability to never die from any physical wound at the price that he would feed him 100 souls every generation. When searching for Jenny the immortal named Kronos Payne (YAY FOR KRONOS!). Kronos ends up rending Tony to shreads but not killing him because of Marumasa. While this is going on Aidan gets visited by a Realm Keeper which is kind of the equivalent of a God i guess you could say, but different. He reveals to him that either he can formally return himself to her, revealing that he shouldn't have a conscience that he is made up of a material named demensia cloth. He appeared from a different demension after a freak accident and appeared on top of Jennifer and absorbed her depressed dark side giving him the ability to think feel exist around negative emotions. Jennifer existing in this realm and having rights to those feelings deserved then and he was required to return them. When he returns to Earth he finds 3 immortals about to attack Jenny. Side note Aidan is very powerful. Every single one of his seperate pieces would be able to tear down a mountain with ease. So when he takes about 100 of those and slams them across someones skull it's not a pretty scene. After destroying them he returns to Jenny. He explains everything yay for drama. He returns her part of her to her and he ceases to exist. Later in her second life Jenny figures out a way to bring him back as a human being and they live, more or less, happily ever after. There's the basic idea of the book I'm sure i'll make some changes I am currently writing the first few chapters. Computer tech is about to end so sorry if there are typo's or grammar errors please bear with it. If you spy any and remember please post them in comments and I wil go to editing.
Sincerely
Jonathan Quincy
(KRONOS PAYNE :D)