Wednesday, March 26, 2008

MY BOOK!!!!!

Alright so this first little paragraph will be the name of the book, and name of the trilogy... Just in case you were wondering... Wouldn't want anyone lost now would we...


Reunion, The 1st Book
of the Pein Trilogy

Prologue

It is dark... It usually is on this part of Emagina...... The very ground its self seems to be infested with darkness its self. I slowly go forward on a steady trot. My specially made shoes make hardly any sound. My white long cloak is flowing all around me. My 6 foot long sword attached to my back hardly moves at the bobbing of my walking. I started to sense I was getting near to my climax of my journey. I could sense his aura of destruction. The "Black Hole".. That is what everyone called it. They did not know what else to call it. I do not know why it has such the title because I have never seen it. Yet it is said that it eats the very ground itself. Gaining more and more energy every time. Its consumption and lust for power had driven many animals to their death. Thats why I am here. I am the beginning and the end. The omega the ruler of all. I have come to put a stop to this foul creature that has wrought so much destruction. I Perfect have come to seal this Black Hole to never return. Sensing his presence coming closer and closer to me. I draw my Angle Telo ready for battle. I turn the next corner and there it is. Standing there, it was wearing a robe.. Not just one robe though many many robes. Layering over each other you were surprised there was anything inside of them at all. It suddenly sensed my presence and turned around. Expecting to look into someones face when it turned around, since it had a hood I could not see anything from the back, I was shocked. All I saw where the things face should of been was a gaping hole. One that if you looked too far into you would think you would be sucked into an endless black void! I quickly ran forward with my Telo in striking position and the battle began...

End of Prologue

Please comment!
Also I have just been reading and realized that I should of over read it and some of it has grammar errors.. So please inform me of errors or of something that doesn't quite make sense. And I will evaluate as quickly as possible!


Thursday, March 20, 2008

I have question...............

So I have an idea of something that would have me post alot but I don't know if it is really worth it.... So Please give me feed back, I don't even know if anyone checks my blog anymore because I have not posted for so long... Well I think I am going to write my developed idea for my story.... Its not perfect yet but I need to write some stuff to see if I can write it to be understood. So please tell me if you want me to write about my story...

Tuesday, March 11, 2008

Remembering my Blog

Well sorry for not posting forever... I might need to go for a sec to Mutual... Or however you may spell it... Well I am waiting for my game to install... So I have decided when I have times like this I am going to write my story I have made... It may be hard to understand because things in my head are crazy... Well hopefully Secret of Solstice, my game, will finish before mutual... Well see ya feel free to email me!