Saturday, August 9, 2008

Chapter 2 (1st part)

Chapter 2

"Magic"

*3 months later*

I woke up to the sound of an alarm clock on the ground next to me. It was dark in the room besides for it's red light stretching shadows across the room. It read 6:00 A.M. After 3 months I still had not totally gotten use to the early schedule.  Although this time when Phobos would spare me I would last for more than 5 seconds. I had reached 50 seconds. I don't know about you but when sparring someone like Phobos it was more like trying to fight back and machine gun that had bullets that were atomic bombs. But he had one very strong advantage that will hopefully start to change today. He knew how to use his magic. He has not told me much about magic. I just know you have to speak some sort of words in a special language. And things will happen, so just like those fictional books that you read right??? Well we will find out but, I have a feeling that it won't be as simple as that. Now let me explain my crazy schedule in the morning. From 6 to 8 I must do physical building things. Such as: push ups, sit ups, crunches, lunges, jumping jacks, mountain climbers, wall sits, pull ups, weight lifting, running, and things of the sort. Because believe it or not me and Phobos were the only people at head quarters. Because everyone else were on special missions. Including are leader, that is normally in head quarters shut up in his room. They suppose to be on separate missions all working to stop Jezibel. I actually still do not know that much about Jezibel except these few things I will share with you. One Jezibel goes by Jessica because Jezibel is the name of a very bad person in the Holy bible. By the way I do not know who Jezibel is in the Bible you would have to go look that up yourself. She is very much so a demon/human. Strangely enough though she only has 2 attributes about a demon that gives her away as a demon instead of a human. 1, she was very very very beautiful. She was lustful, she was a trap to humans. 2 she had wings of a demon. Although they were apparantly very easy to hide with magic. So as you can see, I have feeling very left behind not knowing a thing about magic. Any how, back to Jezibel. Since she was 3/4's demon she was very powerful. She's like the crazy ones you see in movies and you don't like the movie because it was so out there it was not believable. Yes she does have the capability to dodge bullets, run as fast as a car, yadda yadda. It goes on for what seems like forever. 

Well, that's just about everything I know about Jezibel. I think there's a few things I need to clarify about are present time and you could say location. First of all I'm not sure what year we were but I can tell you this. The happening happened in 2014. Now I need to explain the happening to you. It has many names actually, I've hear of it being called as the Salvation, Redemption, and many other religious comments. Yet simply this is what happened. And humongous Earthquake that went off our charts happened in a diagonal line all the way around the world. It cut humans population in half and covered some giant pieces of land with water and lifted other pieces of land. It has not been recorded how long it has been since the Happening. I can tell you that we do not have a map of the world now, but, I do know there is people that are trying to make maps. And there are people that are trying to recreate countries and governments. Although probably the biggest one is only of 15 million people that is way bigger than any other one. And that is still not that big. Another thing that happened. About 10% of the remaining population after the happening began to say involve. Began to become a bit stronger, bit smarter, and a bit faster than any other normal person. And most of all they began to be able to use these skills that were unexplainable by scientists. It is commonly known as Magic. Well now the Peayna family, my family, believes that there's a reason for this evolution. Something woke this evolution up in us. And it is that doom that Jezibel is trying to bring. Now that the human population had been evolving to prepare itself to stop this doom upon themselves. You also know how you guys don't know a things about the deep deep deep deep deep sea? We'll that giant earthquake kind of stirred up the waters. And their has been some reports from people in the family of strange human like fish that have been spotted at the surface of the water. Alright sorry if I'm boring you with this history lesson. So ya that is what the Peayna family is trying to do guard us from our doom. Haha, it really just kind of makes me laugh. Sounds so much like one of those story's you read in the books and so the actual fact that I'm in one is crazy. And I'm almost done with physical training I am ready for magic. Only 10 more minutes and I can finally go down the hall to our sparring room and start learning.

Well please tell me of any errors I made. I feel like I am writing forever. I have the rest of the chapter planned out I just can't write any more. So long, and I'm just barely starting to get to the main subject of the chapter >.

3 comments:

mommaquincy said...

That Jezibel doesn't sound like a very good person. Where's all of the rest of your family while you are at headquarters? Did you ever find your parents? Do you know where they are?

Jenny Kendall said...

That was freaking amazing! I really like the alarm clock at the start. Very poetic. Your evolution idea seems like a good set up for a new world. I'm not kidding. I want to finish reading your book, and I stopped in the middle of Harry Potter.
As far as errors, I'd say you could use a little bit of grammar help, but that is an easy fix. I'd write the whole book before doing a grammar edit. I'm sure Mom could help you. She has read A LOT and she's really good at grammar.

Jessica said...

Keep up the good work!