You Never Know In tell you try
I never thought this hall could be so long. Felt like I went through a 10k run trying to get to that door that opened to the room where Phobos walked in circles about. When I finally reached the large metal door and pulled the handle while pushing on the door did I feel like I could handle it no longer. Let me say one thing real quick. Even though I am trying desperately to serve my family and become a worthy survivor of the Peayn family I have a few faults. Well more than a few, but, one of my largest ones is excitement mixed with impatience. You can't get me excited about something and expect me to wait. It is untold of. So when I walked in the room and Phobos said, "Wait a few minutes I need to gather my thoughts." I was about ready to scream bloody murder. Thankfully I choked down the scream and managed to just bite my lip in frustration. Suddenly I tasted blood and panicked for a few moments. Really it was just I always seem to forget how my teeth are somewhat unaturally sharp. All our teeth our, I guess it's one of our cat like features to have sharp teeth. You would think I would be able to remember by now, but, as always I'm always making a fool of myself. It seemd liked about 7 years, in truth about 7 minutes, before Phobos finally turned to me with the heir about him that he was going to speak.
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TIME OUT!!! Okay even though this may be all interesting I was just reading back on my 1st chapter. IGNORE THE FIRST CHAPTER. Let me hurry and make some corrections right now. His brothers name is Jarx and not Isaac. His teachers name is Phobos and not Bryan. He didn't go to school for when he was born the world was just torn to pieces and nothing really had enough order for school. Also the last thing Phobos says at the end of the first chapter. Totally ingore it all together. First of all Kronos should already know all about Jezabel. Second It's not phobos' attitude to be like that. Alright I hope that was everything if there is ANYTHING you do not understand just leave a comment and I will try and make all clear. Here I go again. Yeah, sorry side comment, Ignore everything I wrote before about Kronos not knowing who Jezabel is. I will tell you who she is in a short time.
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"So Kronos," Phobos said in a somewhat hesitant voice, "You are extremely excited to learn magic eh?"
"Yes Sir!" I said trying to restrain the tone of a kids excitement in my voice. Phobos than turned to me his scared up face and deep dark eyes seeming to look straight into me. His bright blonde almost yellow hair, like all of our hair, as boring as ever.
"Well that's good because you already know it." Wait what was he saying?
"Sir, are you mistaken I do not know how to use one ability that's out of the oridnary?" He better tell me something soon or I might get very angry. Well that is to say very dissapointed.
"You are not going to be the one casting the spells Kronos. We are never the ones that cast the spell. We only hold the power to instruct others to channel the energy around us as a weapon. Do you follow?" he said with his all so proffesional voice.
"I think so sir but, are you trying to say that all the stuff you have been doing like walking through walls and starting fire just by touching things is not your doing. That really you are just telling some other person to do it?" I truely was confused now.
"Yes, and no. Yes it was not me casting the spells no it was not another person casting the spells. It was, errr... How shall I word this. Let's say it was the other me. It was my other half. Many people know it as their conscious. The little thing that always seems to nudge you in the right direction. Almost like your very soul or inside being. Why would I say this is not me. Because In a very literal sense you have to ask your conscious to do the magic. You do not just do it, it takes a trade."
"A trade, what do they want money???" I said in an almost sarcastic tone but, curious non the less. Phobos than went to the other side of the room where a wooden table was propped up. It was not too large but, looked sturdy.
"I decided that an example would be the best way to describe this," he took a deep breath (he hates talking for long periods of times), "In everything we do, we require energy to do it. For example;" with a sudden motion he brought down his arm in the direct middle of the table and it smashed in two, if you don't count all the little spinters that flew everywhere. "When I did that, it required energy, conentration, and the actual action of doing it. Same basic thing goes with magic. Except you are giving the energy. You are concentrating, and finally acting one with your conscious. Understand?"
"Mostly, that all sounds nice but I can tell by the tone in your voice that you really don't expect me to get it." I said with my usual talking tone. Apparantly this tone was annoying and sometimes hard to understand at times. But, Jarx was the only one that said that. He complains about my existence alot.
OKAY!!! were ending their. Alex wants me to go on a bike ride. I'll hopefully post the 2nd half sometime soon. I love you all my family and sorry. I hope some of you still check it and comment. I love hearing comments from you!!!
"Yes Sir!" I said trying to restrain the tone of a kids excitement in my voice. Phobos than turned to me his scared up face and deep dark eyes seeming to look straight into me. His bright blonde almost yellow hair, like all of our hair, as boring as ever.
"Well that's good because you already know it." Wait what was he saying?
"Sir, are you mistaken I do not know how to use one ability that's out of the oridnary?" He better tell me something soon or I might get very angry. Well that is to say very dissapointed.
"You are not going to be the one casting the spells Kronos. We are never the ones that cast the spell. We only hold the power to instruct others to channel the energy around us as a weapon. Do you follow?" he said with his all so proffesional voice.
"I think so sir but, are you trying to say that all the stuff you have been doing like walking through walls and starting fire just by touching things is not your doing. That really you are just telling some other person to do it?" I truely was confused now.
"Yes, and no. Yes it was not me casting the spells no it was not another person casting the spells. It was, errr... How shall I word this. Let's say it was the other me. It was my other half. Many people know it as their conscious. The little thing that always seems to nudge you in the right direction. Almost like your very soul or inside being. Why would I say this is not me. Because In a very literal sense you have to ask your conscious to do the magic. You do not just do it, it takes a trade."
"A trade, what do they want money???" I said in an almost sarcastic tone but, curious non the less. Phobos than went to the other side of the room where a wooden table was propped up. It was not too large but, looked sturdy.
"I decided that an example would be the best way to describe this," he took a deep breath (he hates talking for long periods of times), "In everything we do, we require energy to do it. For example;" with a sudden motion he brought down his arm in the direct middle of the table and it smashed in two, if you don't count all the little spinters that flew everywhere. "When I did that, it required energy, conentration, and the actual action of doing it. Same basic thing goes with magic. Except you are giving the energy. You are concentrating, and finally acting one with your conscious. Understand?"
"Mostly, that all sounds nice but I can tell by the tone in your voice that you really don't expect me to get it." I said with my usual talking tone. Apparantly this tone was annoying and sometimes hard to understand at times. But, Jarx was the only one that said that. He complains about my existence alot.
OKAY!!! were ending their. Alex wants me to go on a bike ride. I'll hopefully post the 2nd half sometime soon. I love you all my family and sorry. I hope some of you still check it and comment. I love hearing comments from you!!!
2 comments:
sounds interesting. Its a bit confusing about all the changes, of course I'd have to reread it to remember the first chapter anyway, so maybe it doesn't matter. Let the magic begin!
until not in tell. haha told you i'd comment sometime.
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