Monday, September 15, 2008

READ READ :D!

Alright. So I just thought this up a while ago. And I thought it was pretty cool. Or at least cool enough to jot down on the old bloggy blog blog. Also I do plan to keep writing book. Just have a hard time finding enough time to do so. I mean even right now I'm suppose to be hurrying so I can go to bed. So forgive me for areas of this poem, I guess you could call it, that don't exactly make sense. Please comment xD.

The Servants Love

We have but, one true master.
And we are but one true servant.
One has often thought as a servant as being a slave. Or one that does hard tribulation for a master just because they are told to. Yet we are true servants to our true master.
And in truth the servants need our master to be true.
And once we become faithful servants we discover something. True happiness, true strength, and a true reason to live.
Once we become the servants to our Master. We will discover a dream. Or commonly called a goal.
Because,
It has been able to show us what true happiness is.
Which is to be able to feel our love from our master.
That love that smothers us in eternal happiness.
That love that makes you want to stand up and sing praises.
Yet we always have that love and all we need to do is to seek it with an earnest heart.
And we will feel that wonderful love.
This master has a love that it could give a reason for a servant to fight for right, and give them true strength to conquer all evil. And that's when the servant finds their own little love.
Their love to serve the master.
Their goal,
Their Happiness...
They'll discover that, if they have truly become a servant to the master, feeling his love was unimaginable.
Now the true servants knew that there was even one more greater thing.
Doing the Master's Works.
Because they knew doing his work is how they showed their love....
Towards him, giving him their own gift back.
Knowing when they come back to him again once their work is done.
And have them pat them on the shoulder.
And Embrace them,
and say
Well done.
That they had given them their love....
The Servants Love.

Well Hope you liked it xD!

4 comments:

Jonathan? said...

That was really awesome! You are a pretty deep kid!

mommaquincy said...

Actually that comment wasn't haku, it was me, Mom. Anyway, good stuff Jonathan!

Jessica said...

Very good! I had no idea you were such a deep thinker. :)

Canadian said...

Wow jon! That was way awesome! It really got me thinking. I was really surprised. Did you really think that up? It was AMAZING!