Just Keeping you up to date

 Well, I am in St. George right now. And it is very fun. Grandma is as loving as ever and the 2 dogs are funny. I actually didn't mind the car drive. For some reason it really didn't seem that long. Also my book. I am thinking very hard on it. Making sure everything is perfect and planned out before I actually write it out. Jack suggested me to write down my outline so I could keep everything straight. Oh well, I am going to tell you a few changes right now just to show you I am thinking about the book. For one, Kronoss' last name is now Paeyn instead of Peyn. I have made a proper system of magic that explains how magic works. My main bad guy now has a goal and personalty. There is more families besides the Paeyn family. Like the Muirs. Or the Elverantors. All of them, also I have made a lead lead bad guy. And a leader of the good force. And a teacher for Kronos. Also I have made parents for Kronos. The setting of everything. Well please keep reading and commenting. I love you all!!!