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hey I did a this school and I don't want to lose it. So i'm going to post it here. You can read it if you want.

There is a strange scent in the air. All of us can sense it. We’re not sure what to do. All of us had the same thought though. She’s coming… Suddenly the strange figure started to get up. Jarx and I got ready to beat him down. Suddenly he turned away and faced, her. She is here. Suddenly the strange being started speaking. “You! It’s you what does this mean how could this be.” He said in a voice that sounded like he was ready to strike her.
“Oh darling, please. You’ve been a fool all along,” she said in a little too pleasant of voice that was strangely sweet. But there was some kind of menace behind it. All you had to do was to listen. “Not exactly the angel you expected to come save you?” she said with a little smile on her face. “Halowine, it was I that entered your dreams and told you to do those slaughters!” she suddenly was getting louder and louder and seemingly more giddy. “It was I that told you it was your job to purify the world! And being the gullible little child you are you believed every word of it. I have made you the thing you never wanted to be. You have failed!” she ended with a tone of pure delight and almost has she had accomplished something.
“How dare you, you little devil.” He said in almost a whisper but very audibly and strangely it didn’t sound human. He suddenly picked up his strange weapon and starting charging at her. “I will do one good thing in my life and it will be killing you to avenge all those people you have had me kill!” Charging with inhuman speed he jumped 8 ft. in the air and thrust down with enough force to split a building in half. A giant boom sounded shard of ground flew everywhere. Nothing could be seen through the dust that erupted from the impact. For half a second all that could be heard was the scuffle of the two as they brawled. Once of the cloud finally disappeared we saw Halowine on the ground in a great heap. And Jezabel stood seemingly untouched. Not a single long strand of raven black hair out of place.
“You know he isn’t dead yet but, I was just saving It just so you could see,” she said in an ghostly voice. She walked up to Halowine’s body and picked up by one hand. Instantly the three of us reacted but with one simple word of magic we were suddenly bound in our own shadows that came up and grasped us. We could not move. That same power that I felt coming up when fighting Halowine start to rise in me. Yet, it was still not enough to brake these bonds. At least not yet. She than started chanting to her self. And lifted her hand that was not grasping Halowine’s neck and held it up to his face. Suddenly and ghostly mirror image of her hand started to drag out of hers. The mirror image that was oddly transparent and ghost like starting moving slowly to his face. At that moment I wanted nothing more than to break out of my bonds and fling myself in between them. Suddenly my strength exploded and an strange kind of energy enveloped my body and melted the bonds away. Jezabel instantly noticed and the hand that was moving so slowly before suddenly threw itself into Halowine.
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